Beatrice, I thought your video was fairly unique, you used the video itself to express your opinion, however I think the assignment was to show what your body is doing while participating in these actions, not to express opinions in the actual video. However you blog post was well written.
I like how you gave a very strong opinion on this subject, how you'd rather spend time with your friends than spend time on digital devices, I would have liked to see you explain that comment in detail and explain why. What's the appeal in being outside, how does that differ from digital devices? will digital devices ever simulate or copy this appeal? You made a good post but I'd like you to expand on your ideas and try to use the blog for opinions and the video for evidence. Keep up the good work
I like how you gave a very strong opinion on this subject, how you'd rather spend time with your friends than spend time on digital devices, I would have liked to see you explain that comment in detail and explain why. What's the appeal in being outside, how does that differ from digital devices? will digital devices ever simulate or copy this appeal? You made a good post but I'd like you to expand on your ideas and try to use the blog for opinions and the video for evidence. Keep up the good work
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Jacob, I liked how you compared the experience of making the video editing it and writing about it in the blog, I found that thought to be very insightful. I like how the digital world can let us do millions of different things in our minds in the same exact position, however the downside to that is we don't get exercise for our bodies.
This idea of retaining the same position and doing several different things is the beginning of the answer to the question "why is the internet so addictive" being able to do anything from your home is an amazing ability. The internet grants us power and people naturally want power. Great post, I hope to hear more interesting thoughts from you in the future.
This idea of retaining the same position and doing several different things is the beginning of the answer to the question "why is the internet so addictive" being able to do anything from your home is an amazing ability. The internet grants us power and people naturally want power. Great post, I hope to hear more interesting thoughts from you in the future.